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6-5 Discussion: Implementing a Revision Strategy

6-5 Discussion: Implementing a Revision Strategy

Q Let's look over the current draft of your paper, and then, answer the following questions: First, looking over each section of the draft, in what area do you feel you did particularly well? What made it so strong, and how will you use these strengths in other sections of the draft that may need additional work? Second, which sections of your draft do you feel need further improvement? Why do you feel these sections need to be revised? Which peer or instructor feedback will you use during the revision process?

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First, looking over each section of the draft, in what area do you feel you did particularly well? What made it so strong, and how will you use these strengths in other sections of the draft that may need additional work? According to me, the introduction of my draft seems to be quite strong as I have pointed out my argument quite well and also addressed the points supporting it in the thesis statement. The body of the essay also seems quite strong as the sources that I have provided seem to be enough to support my argument with proper evidence. I would try to use these strengths to negate the counterarguments so that it helps in supporting the argument I have provided.